This story is kind of similar to the end of one of my stories. The problem I have with my story is that it kind of comes out of nowhere with no foreshadowing or evidence that it’s possible in the universe the story takes place in. I think I get away with it if I find the right place to submit it too. drabblecast rejected it and now that I have a better understanding of their format I don’t blame them. I love your story though. It could almost be a sequel. Would you like to read mine and see what you think? The coincidence is uncanny.
Algol Loki Bergemensch
This story is kind of similar to the end of one of my stories. The problem I have with my story is that it kind of comes out of nowhere with no foreshadowing or evidence that it’s possible in the universe the story takes place in. I think I get away with it if I find the right place to submit it too. drabblecast rejected it and now that I have a better understanding of their format I don’t blame them. I love your story though. It could almost be a sequel. Would you like to read mine and see what you think? The coincidence is uncanny.